7 – 8 of the entries are posted within the time period assigned.
5 - 6 of the entries are posted within the time period assigned.
3 - 4 of the entries are posted within the time period assigned.
1 - 2of the entries are posted within the time period assigned.
None of the entries are posted within the time period assigned.
Completion
5/5
All entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner.
More than half of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner.
Some of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner.
Less than half of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner.
None of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner.
Explanation of Evidence
3/5
All of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place.
More than half of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place.
Some of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place.
Less than half of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place.
None of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place.
Authenticity of Evidence
4/5
All of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience.
More than half of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience.
Some of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience.
Less than half of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience.
None of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience.
Style, voice, creativity
4/5
All of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality.
More than half of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality.
Some of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality.
Less than half of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality.
None of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality.
TOTAL:
21/25
SUMMER 2010 ¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨ .POSTS. ¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨
First Week -posted: JUNE 4 This week I have decided to read the fourth book of the Pretty Little Liars Series by Sara Shepard. I am currently on page 163, chapter 19. These book shave captivated my attention because they enthrall my imagination while entertaining me deeply. Sara Shepard is brilliant while creating a complot involving four girls who are being black-mailed by an anonymous stalker. My favorite character is Hanna because while living a life full of struggles she remains standing. Everybody wants to destroy her but she remains perseverant and pushes through all of her issues. This book continues on the life of four girls who are trying to live their life while hiding all the secrets an anonymous stalker threatens to uncover. This anonymous person is thought to be an old friend of theirs who went missing many years ago. This series has fascinated me on it premieres on ABC Family on Monday. My goal is to finish reading it and start reading the fifth book.
SECOND WEEK-posted: JUNE 12
This week I finished the fourth book of the Pretty Little Liars book written by Sara Shepard. It is tittled Unbelievable. The ending was incredible! it left me wanting to read was was going to happen next. My favorite character Hanna, her life is getting more and more interesting by every book. The lives of Hanna, Aria, Spencer and Emily are getting more and more complicated. In this book they discover who A is and she is killed. A was Hanna's best friend Mona and she tried to kill Spencer when her identity was uncovered. Sara Shepard has written an incredibly saga that keeps you turning pages. I am a little disappointed that I could not finish the book but I have note had time. This week the tv show premiered and it was so good but not as good as the book. I love these books!
THIRD WEEK -posted: JUNE 18
This third week I started reading the fifth book of the saga, titled Wicked. I have been reading written by Sara Shepard. In this book, many interesting things happen. After “A” is discovered to be Mona, Hanna’s best friend, they start to receive new text messages from another “A”. The cops, as well as their good friend Darren Wilden, do not believe them. They believe it is an impostor trying to scare them. When things start to go really bad, everything they thought was true is questioned. More of their secrets are threatened to be destroyed and everybody worries about their life being on the line. My favorite character Hanna is getting paranoiac and she misses her old best friend dearly. She worries someone is trying to haunt her and she fears for her life. Sara Shepard continues to captivate my attention and her stories keep me turning pages. Her stories are very creative.
FOURTH WEEK -posted: JUNE 28
This week I got to do something different. Last year I went to a camp in North Carolina. I was called Camp Ton-A-Wondah. I went for three weeks and I made a lot of friends. I stayed in a cabin of girls of my same age named Beechnut. We were called the Beechnut Beechnuts. We has three counselors, Kieley, Mary Ashley and Lana. They were really cool and we always had fun around them. I was in a cabin with eleven more girls and it was really fun the time I spent there. I wish I could go back. Yesterday I talked on Skype with one of my best friends, Roxanne. Of course the talk was in English because unfortunately she is not fluent in Spanish giving that she does not live here or somewhere close. As a proof of our Skype call here is a copy pasted wall she left me on facebook before we ended our call. We had Internet problems but I am seeing her again today. I LOVE MY CAMP FRIENDS!
Roxanne Nai'a FeligAlexia C. Molina
: come back on to skype!! Yesterday at 8:35pm FIFTH WEEK -posted: JULY 5 This week I watched my favorite show online, Pretty Little Liars. I watched the fourth episode because I missed it when it aired on TV last tuesday. This episode is titled "Can You Hear Me Now?". This show is getting better and better as it promised. Of course it is in English and that is why I chose it for the topic of my journal entry. In the show, Hanna, Emily, Aria and Spencer try to block all texts, calls and emails from people they do not know. What they do not know is that this is not enough to restore the peace in their lives. "A" wants to destroy them. I know what happens next because of course I read all the books. I am still missing the last one though. The TV show sometimes gets me of guard because there are a few variations on the story line which is to be expected since many watchers read the books before and they would get bored sometime of watching what they read on TV. This series is amazing because it has gossip and many love interests. Although the , physically, do not match the description of the books they still do a good job picking the people who will interpret the characters on TV. I LOVE PRETTY LITTLE LIARS.
SIXTH WEEK: This week I flew to Miami. When I arrived I had a nice chat with the security officer. They asked me what was my purpose, where I was going to stay, and basically made sure there was nothing illegal going on. This was the first time I was not traveling with my parents. I went to miami with my grandparents and my uncle. It was awesome and we had a lot a fun. While there I went to the movies to watch many movies. My uncle is the best and he made it so fun for me. AS the picture below says I left Friday July 9 and I came back July 16 which was also a Friday. We went to the mall and we also did doctor check-ups. Of course we did not miss the semi final and the final match games of the world cup. When Uruguay and Germany were playing I was team Germany and when the Netherlands played against Spain I was team Netherlands of course we lost and it was such a bummer. I felt many games were unfair but their is not really that much you can do but keep cheering. I got to sleep in and eat all of my favorite foods. It was the best ever. My grandparents were so fun and I laughed a lot. I love them so much and I hope their is another trip with them. SEVENTH WEEK: This week of summer I was so happy when my favorite magazine arrived. Seventeen Magazine, the best magazine ever. I was so thrilled when I got to read it because I try so hard not to miss an issue although sometimes its hard because they either get lost on the way here or they come really late. I got to read about all the new trends and amazing clothes. I love to read style tips and how to manage my hair and everything. I also enjoy reading other girl experiences in the section called Traumarama. Its funny how all girls have embarrassing moments. This is the august issue and even though its not August yet it is awesome to get to read what next month will bring according to my horoscope. I know some people say it is not true or it is bad to believe it but they are actually pretty accurate and sometimes help me figure things out. This magazine also includes a six week plan to get in shape, of course it is not really that useful when unfortunately summer is almost over but knowledge is not bad for anyone. I am a big fan of this magazine and as long as it keeps arriving I will keep reading it religiously. Every single word of every single page.
EIGHTH WEEK:
This week i finished reading the Sara Shepard Saga of Pretty Little Liars. The last book I read is called Heartless. It was incredible. Obviously the best book I read of all the series. It was full of drama, gossip and obviously romance. I have been following the series on ABC family as well. The series is not as good as the books but its close because things take an interesting turn while in the books certain things did not happen. In this book they still do not find out who is the person who is stalking them. At the end of the book the find out that Ali was in fact killed by a man named Billy Ford. He was working on a construction at their house. The girls are not so sure about this man because Ali's disappearance seems so strange and out of the blue. They believe she is still alive somewhere and they are determined to find what really happened to her. The last book in the series that I still do not poses is Wanted. I am dying to read it but i have not gotten to yet. The last book has to be the best.
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21/25
This week I have decided to read the fourth book of the Pretty Little Liars Series by Sara Shepard. I am currently on page 163, chapter 19. These book shave captivated my attention because they enthrall my imagination while entertaining me deeply. Sara Shepard is brilliant while creating a complot involving four girls who are being black-mailed by an anonymous stalker. My favorite character is Hanna because while living a life full of struggles she remains standing. Everybody wants to destroy her but she remains perseverant and pushes through all of her issues. This book continues on the life of four girls who are trying to live their life while hiding all the secrets an anonymous stalker threatens to uncover. This anonymous person is thought to be an old friend of theirs who went missing many years ago. This series has fascinated me on it premieres on ABC Family on Monday. My goal is to finish reading it and start reading the fifth book.
SECOND WEEK
This week I finished the fourth book of the Pretty Little Liars book written by Sara Shepard. It is tittled Unbelievable. The ending was incredible! it left me wanting to read was was going to happen next. My favorite character Hanna, her life is getting more and more interesting by every book. The lives of Hanna, Aria, Spencer and Emily are getting more and more complicated. In this book they discover who A is and she is killed. A was Hanna's best friend Mona and she tried to kill Spencer when her identity was uncovered. Sara Shepard has written an incredibly saga that keeps you turning pages. I am a little disappointed that I could not finish the book but I have note had time. This week the tv show premiered and it was so good but not as good as the book. I love these books!
This third week I started reading the fifth book of the saga, titled Wicked. I have been reading written by Sara Shepard. In this book, many interesting things happen. After “A” is discovered to be Mona, Hanna’s best friend, they start to receive new text messages from another “A”. The cops, as well as their good friend Darren Wilden, do not believe them. They believe it is an impostor trying to scare them. When things start to go really bad, everything they thought was true is questioned. More of their secrets are threatened to be destroyed and everybody worries about their life being on the line. My favorite character Hanna is getting paranoiac and she misses her old best friend dearly. She worries someone is trying to haunt her and she fears for her life. Sara Shepard continues to captivate my attention and her stories keep me turning pages. Her stories are very creative.
FOURTH WEEK -posted: JUNE 28
This week I got to do something different. Last year I went to a camp in North Carolina. I was called Camp Ton-A-Wondah. I went for three weeks and I made a lot of friends. I stayed in a cabin of girls of my same age named Beechnut. We were called the Beechnut Beechnuts. We has three counselors, Kieley, Mary Ashley and Lana. They were really cool and we always had fun around them. I was in a cabin with eleven more girls and it was really fun the time I spent there. I wish I could go back. Yesterday I talked on Skype with one of my best friends, Roxanne. Of course the talk was in English because unfortunately she is not fluent in Spanish giving that she does not live here or somewhere close. As a proof of our Skype call here is a copy pasted wall she left me on facebook before we ended our call. We had Internet problems but I am seeing her again today. I LOVE MY CAMP FRIENDS!
Roxanne Nai'a FeligAlexia C. Molina
: come back on to skype!!
Yesterday at 8:35pm
FIFTH WEEK
-posted: JULY 5
This week I watched my favorite show online, Pretty Little Liars. I watched the fourth episode because I missed it when it aired on TV last tuesday. This episode is titled "Can You Hear Me Now?". This show is getting better and better as it promised. Of course it is in English and that is why I chose it for the topic of my journal entry. In the show, Hanna, Emily, Aria and Spencer try to block all texts, calls and emails from people they do not know. What they do not know is that this is not enough to restore the peace in their lives. "A" wants to destroy them. I know what happens next because of course I read all the books. I am still missing the last one though. The TV show sometimes gets me of guard because there are a few variations on the story line which is to be expected since many watchers read the books before and they would get bored sometime of watching what they read on TV. This series is amazing because it has gossip and many love interests. Although the , physically, do not match the description of the books they still do a good job picking the people who will interpret the characters on TV. I LOVE PRETTY LITTLE LIARS.
This week I flew to Miami. When I arrived I had a nice chat with the security officer. They asked me what was my purpose, where I was going to stay, and basically made sure there was nothing illegal going on. This was the first time I was not traveling with my parents. I went to miami with my grandparents and my uncle. It was awesome and we had a lot a fun. While there I went to the movies to watch many movies. My uncle is the best and he made it so fun for me. AS the picture below says I left Friday July 9 and I came back July 16 which was also a Friday. We went to the mall and we also did doctor check-ups. Of course we did not miss the semi final and the final match games of the world cup. When Uruguay and Germany were playing I was team Germany and when the Netherlands played against Spain I was team Netherlands of course we lost and it was such a bummer. I felt many games were unfair but their is not really that much you can do but keep cheering. I got to sleep in and eat all of my favorite foods. It was the best ever. My grandparents were so fun and I laughed a lot. I love them so much and I hope their is another trip with them.
This week of summer I was so happy when my favorite magazine arrived. Seventeen Magazine, the best magazine ever. I was so thrilled when I got to read it because I try so hard not to miss an issue although sometimes its hard because they either get lost on the way here or they come really late. I got to read about all the new trends and amazing clothes. I love to read style tips and how to manage my hair and everything. I also enjoy reading other girl experiences in the section called Traumarama. Its funny how all girls have embarrassing moments. This is the august issue and even though its not August yet it is awesome to get to read what next month will bring according to my horoscope. I know some people say it is not true or it is bad to believe it but they are actually pretty accurate and sometimes help me figure things out. This magazine also includes a six week plan to get in shape, of course it is not really that useful when unfortunately summer is almost over but knowledge is not bad for anyone. I am a big fan of this magazine and as long as it keeps arriving I will keep reading it religiously. Every single word of every single page.
This week i finished reading the Sara Shepard Saga of Pretty Little Liars. The last book I read is called Heartless. It was incredible. Obviously the best book I read of all the series. It was full of drama, gossip and obviously romance. I have been following the series on ABC family as well. The series is not as good as the books but its close because things take an interesting turn while in the books certain things did not happen. In this book they still do not find out who is the person who is stalking them. At the end of the book the find out that Ali was in fact killed by a man named Billy Ford. He was working on a construction at their house. The girls are not so sure about this man because Ali's disappearance seems so strange and out of the blue. They believe she is still alive somewhere and they are determined to find what really happened to her. The last book in the series that I still do not poses is Wanted. I am dying to read it but i have not gotten to yet. The last book has to be the best.